Feedback 3 - That is a terrible dream, the poor budgie. I glad it wasn’t eaten by that beastly cat. I enjoyed your scene. It was scary and dark - filled with tension. The setting - the sun drops over the horizon, leaving the deck in shadow - creepy as, A dim orange light - creepier still. Just the right amount of language, not to overwhelming. Thanks, if you think I could improve this critique in any way, let me know.