There is something about a person sitting on a train crying that really gets to me. Unless there is an actual reason for their misery, like someone trod on their foot, or they lost their train ticket and fear a fine…well that’s not so bad. But if they are just sitting there crying because of something that happened to them twenty years ago…well that is really depressing.

You described the train scene beautifully. I felt sad as I read it.

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